Friday 13 June 2014

My learning

WALT:Use simile's to imagery in our writing.

                                          {SHARKS}

1.The sharks face is as gray as the winter sky thats about to pour down raining.
2.The sharks teeth are as sharp as broken glass that has just been smashed by a sledge hammer.
3.The sharks are as fast as a tiger hunting for its meaty prey.
4.The sharks eyes are as squashy as  a baby grape thats about to be eaten by a 25 yr old human being.
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